Script Ideas.

We cut alot of the dialogue so our timings would fit with our scene, this is why it is so short. Here is the final and cut version of our script.

Scene 1: Outside the pub.
Karly and Danni are sitting smoking and drinking in the beer garden. Simon is sitting on a table behind, watching them.
Karly receives a phonecall from boyfriend Sam about a party in the woods.


Karly: [Outside Pub, On the phone] Hiya, where are you?

Scene 2: The drink spiking

Once both girls have gone to get another drink in the pub,without dialogue Simon walks over to the table and spikes Karly's Drink with pills. He then walks towards the woods and waits.

Karly returns and swigs the drink, feeling suddenly very ill and stumbling she starts to run in search of her boyfriend.

Scene 3: In the woods.

Danni: [Running down hill, on the phone] Sam!

Sam: [Chasing after them] Karly, Danni!

Stalker: [Grabbing her by the hair] Three years I have waited for you, Why don't you love me!?

[Simon slits Karlys throat, still holding the knife walks towards Danni]

Danni: [Screams]